The Official Writing Challenge
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04/15/16
A sweet poem encompassing the various levels of social interaction. I enjoyed it.
04/16/16
I like the cadence of your entry. It told a nice story, it maybe could have showed me more of what your were writing about, but the read was smooth and you made your point well. Good job!
04/16/16
I like the imagery of this piece and how you carried us through all of the various relationships and how they compare to the one ultimate relationship with Christ.

There were one or two lines that I stumbled over, but it was probably more me than the writing, since I got interrupted twice in the middle of reading it.

Overall I thought this was a very pleasant read and painted a nice word picture.

Thanks for sharing!
04/17/16
Beautiful job!

Blessings~
This is really lovely. It flows so nicely. It brought tears to my eyes and really touched my heart.
04/18/16
This poem had a nice cadance and a nice flow. It touched my heart.
Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!