The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
This was a jewel of a story. Nice job with the topic which was clearly throughout the entire story. I really liked it.
God Bless~
01/13/12
I think God allowing us to be parents is His way of showing us His mighty love and commitment for us, His children. This was a wonderful poem and certainly one my mother heart could totally relate to. Great job!
As a childless not by choice women, this poem is hard for me to read only because I cannot relate to any of this. However, I am sure my father felt that way as I was growing up.

Thank you for sharing your writing talent.
01/18/12
I have tears in my eyes as you've so beautifully conveyed everything I feel about my children. They grow up so fast! Beautiful words, right on topic...thanks for sharing!!
This is delightful. I could so relate as my oldest is getting married in Oct. Motherhood is definitely a life long commitment. Congratulations for ranking 9th in Masters and 14th overall!