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07/14/11
Lovely! The second verse was very visual--the line with the land as mute, never thought of it that way before. Nicely done.
07/14/11
nice progreesion with the images this poem portrayed
07/19/11
I like your depiction of the natural conflicts across our world, and I love the hope that wraps it all up. Excellent work.
07/19/11
As always, succinct, compelling word choices with that always reliable inner pulse.

Truly well-crafted.
07/19/11
Another beautifully-written poem. The images, the words, and the hope at the end is all perfection. Great job!
07/19/11
Powerful, vivid word descriptions of nature's war on humanity. Excellent choice of words that paint pictures in our minds. A winner in my book!
07/19/11
I love your creative approach to the topic, and the imagery makes your poem so visual! I had a hard time following the rhyme scheme, but the emotional impact of your words was stunning. Reminds me of a Psalm. :)
07/19/11
Peace forevermore...I can't wait!