The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written. I like the opening line, and especially like how you show that we can't buy our way into heaven, God's biggest and most magnificent display of all. Well done.
The cost was so dear to Jesus Christ. He paid a huge debt.
I love the concept, selling tickets to Godís glorious (and free) attractions. I wonder how many more of us would take the time to appreciate them if we actually had to pay to see them. Well written piece Ė I enjoyed it!
Very beautiful. I love your message and the elegant way you presented it. Congratulations for placing 10th in Masters and 13th overall.