The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/11
I like the POV of this piece. Well done. Thank you.
01/25/11
So very creative! Beautiful descriptions.
Wow, I just love this tree that has interest in me.
01/26/11
Once I reached the end of your story, I had to go back and read it again to savor it. Really lovely imagery and a great message. Well done!
I love this. The symbolism is powerful. I couldn't help but think of the children's grieving story called the Fall of Freddie the Leaf. You seem to take it a step further, with the Tree of Life always right there watching over us and caring, even when we don't realize it. This is simply beautiful.