The Official Writing Challenge
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I was routing for Warren the whole way. You held my attention -- just wish it had somehow worked out.
11/13/10
Yep, you had me right there too. Great story. Very enjoyable smooth read. Poor MC. Bit sad these cyber dreams.
11/16/10
Good fun material, with clear "Warrren"ing about the perils of cyber-romance. I thought it mighty have been a no-Brianer, but it wasn't. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
11/16/10
This was so fun. I loved the ending - it completely sold the story for me.
Congratulations for placing 10th in level 4 and 14th overall!