The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my! and here I thought this was going to be a romance! I love the humor all the way through, and the concluding line is priceless. I'd say the sodbuster with his variety of feelings got what he deserved.
09/02/10
If that sodbuster likes fried chicken, he better mosey on down to the next barn and work on Plan B. What a delightful read.
09/03/10
Once again you've created an entertaining, fun and witty tale in perfect rhyme and meter which left me smiling. A+++!
09/04/10
Having just come from a week at the fair, I particularly enjoyed this well composed fair fable!
How fun! I enjoyed this. :)
You manage to tell a great story while making the rhyme and meter seem so easy.
Congratulations for placing in the top 40 overall.
03/03/11
Only an old Iowa women would understand all that a State fair brings to the fair. So much fun to read... almost could hear Bill Riley in the background!