The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/10
Oh...if only we could keep him chained! Cute poem.
06/15/10
What fun to read! I loved looking for your muse in the different library sections.. :) This is so very creative. If I should happen upon your muse, I'll point him/her in your direction for the return trip to you. :)
06/15/10
I love this! I don't know about my muse, but I can get lost in a library easily!
06/15/10
So creative, Verna! Loved this! What a creative take on this week's topic!
06/15/10
I was looking over your first verse in particular. How often have a sat at the keyboard with story ready, and haven't got a clue how to start?
06/15/10
Adorable poem! I'd love to be your illustrator for the book you're bound to write with these great poems! You do shine in this poetry form.
This is a cute poem, Verna - I love the imagery!
He's probably off somewhere galivanting with my muse. I'm sure muses all hang out together having a great time and forget themselves when we want them to come around. I enjoyed it very much.
Oh I must disagree with you on this one. I do believe your muse is firmly planted right near your dear sweet heart. This is a beautiful poem. You seem to have a way of writing such musical words that it appears to be the easiest thing to do. I enjoyed every word.
I can picture the sprite playing hide and seek with your MC - very enjoyable!
06/16/10
I was laughing from the first line all the way through!

I was kinda hoping for a clever ending of just where that muse went...yikes! Is he gone forever?

Awesome job!
This was definitely fun to read. Apparently your muse is very well read. If it's a really big library it could take a while to find her. Keep Writing and Hunting.
06/16/10
Too funny! Great humor and creativity here.
06/16/10
Lovely poem! I enjoyed the entire reading, which flows very smoothly in bringing out the entire story and ending it on a rather sad note. Excellent work!
06/16/10
Clever and creative - this was fun to read.
06/26/10
This is so very clever, Verna! I love it! This would make a darling illustrated storybook for children---which would also introduce them to library concepts they sure don't get searching the internet (like Dewey Decimal)! I hope you find the perfect illustrator.