The Official Writing Challenge
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I like historical pieces and this one drew me in. I could picture the scene vividly. The use of the rose was perfect.
I enjoy regency stories, and yours fit the bill nicely. I chuckled at the resiliency and optimism of adolescence.
Aptly done. But does the dashing Lord Daglish deserve to be pursued?
I tried to write one of these once for the ROMANCE topic way, way back. Sure wish I had your skill. Very nicely done. It's hard to bring forth all of the details you would want in a story like this because of the word limit. But, I was impressed with the detail you had. Great job. God bless.
Great writing and story telling. Nicely done.
I think this is charming. Your MC is believable. She has the insecurities of most young ladies. Great sense of time and place, too. Well done.
Loved the fact that Miss Julia got back up after being knocked flat. Great story, wonderful writing.
Oooh, may we have a sequel please? Just a little bit, I'm dying to know what happens with Miss Julia and Lord Daglish, was he really talking about her? Can she sort of I don't know, have a comeback? LOL! It was super-easy for me to get into this story and I wanted more when it ended all too soon. Excellently done!
Your control of the storyline and timing is something to be envied. Great characters and use of conflict.
Hope springs eternal! So true of the optimism of youth....and maybe even of those of us slightly older....