The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/07
Very interesting! I especially loved the professor's quote: "Your life is unwritten, make every word count." That's simultaneously a sobering and an exciting thought!
01/19/07
Great reminder! This isn't about us!
01/22/07
Love the way you tied this all together in the beginning and end, and the dream sequence was SO visual. A fabulous reminder.
WoW! I loved your beginning and your ending. You did such a great job detailing Sydney's enlightenment and renewed passion and purpose, which of course, are essential to great writing.
01/24/07
Yes! I love that dream. I wish you could've given the reader more action earlier in the piece. It began a little slow for me, but then POW! - a wonderful surprise.