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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Cross (as in the Cross of Christ) (08/17/06)

TITLE: On Such a Day as This
By Linda Watson Owen
08/23/06


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On such a day as this our God once walked
upon the grass of Eden long ago,
and there in breezes new to earthís sweet face
the great Creator breathed into a soul.

When Adamís eyes first opened in the mist
God greeted him and loved His new made son.
They walked together in the gardenís midst
where all that God had made was Adamís own.

God gave Adam Ďneath the gardenís sunlight
every treasure of sweet Edenís wealth,
yet the manís heart felt an empty sadness
in the verdant garden where he dwelt.

One more gift from Godís great Hand was fashioned.
Lovingly our God shaped daughter Eve.
On such a day as this in fairest Eden,
man and woman Godís great gift received.

Many years have passed since in the garden
our dear Father first joined man and wife.
Now before the Cross of Christ we gather
in the sacred stillness of new life.

Two shall be as one in hand and spirit.
One anotherís heart is treasure rare.
All who gather celebrate this moment
as we join in sacred holy prayer.

May the God Who rules in earth and Heaven
plant a glorious garden that shall be
all the days before you that lie waiting
for your footsteps through eternity.

May your lives be filled with Godís great Goodness.
May your hearts be showered from above.
Into every moment of your union,
may Christís Spirit flow in ceaseless Love.

Dear sweet couple, as you kneel before Him
the glory of His sacred Cross shines clear.
Feel the blessings of your Heavenly Father
and the warmth of all who gather here.

Go in joy, and laugh in bright tomorrows!
Dance through shadows with strength from above!
Hand in hand and heart in heart together
grow in the Garden of the Fatherís Love!


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Laurie Glass08/24/06
This is a lovely poem with a nice flow and it makes me smile.
Jan Ackerson 08/25/06
Okay, no fair making me cry...I will share this with my engaged daughter...it just overflows with love.
Verna Cole Mitchell 08/26/06
What a beautiful poem this would be to have read at a wedding. How wonderful it is to have God's blessing on marriage! This was a favorite.
Joanne Sher 08/27/06
I LOVED this!! If my husband and I renew our vows at some point, I may just ask for permission to use this!! Perfect rhyme and meter, and such a wonderful, joyous message. Your title is lovely too!
Phyllis Inniss 08/28/06
I also thought this poem/song would be suitable for a wedding. I hope you get someone to put music to it. It is truly a beautiful poem,singing God's grace.
Venice Kichura08/28/06
Just beautiful!!
Pat Guy 08/28/06
Ahhhh! Yes Linda! I have a feeling ...!

Oh so beautiful dear Linda! So perfect and lovely.

One reads this and sighs ...
Trina Courtenay08/30/06
I have to echo the above. This is truly beautiful. I've added it to my favorites - I never want to lose this piece.
Val Clark09/01/06
A wonderful reminder of what the union of two people is supposed to be and something to strive for. yeggy