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04/18/14
I actually got an ache in my stomach while I read this; I felt for Grandma. What a shock to the system it must be for the older generation. But, then you turned it to where, instead of being controlled by the computer, she took control and put it in its place. Well done!
04/19/14
You did an excellent job of bringing "granny" to life, with authentic introspective dialogue, and how others often treat the elderly in a "child like fashion."

I'm with granny. I grab my prayer shawl and my Bible and sit in my chair, for the best entertainment in the world (and I'm in my fifties)...HIS WORD in the palm of my hand!

I loved this! Excellent job.

God bless~
04/20/14
This was a great story. You did an excellent job of bringing Granny to life. Loved all her little thoughts and comments. Well done.
Good life story.

That is probably how my Mom would be at 97.
04/24/14
Congrats! God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 23 overall!