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Topic: Cyber Communication (email, IM’s, etc) (11/04/10)
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TITLE: Impulses | Previous Challenge Entry
By Benjamin Graber
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Sent across a copper wire;
Electrons have been designated
To bear the sparks to start a fire!
Some stories start with impulses
That sprint their way around the world,
As words transformed to ones and zeroes
Into the cyberlands are hurled.
From one computer to another,
Observing careful etiquette,
The impulses will make their way
Across the boundless internet,
Then like a friend who knows he’s welcome
The impulses slip in your room,
And bring a message to your heart
Which makes your cheeks so sweetly bloom!
Some impulses have broken lives
And caused a hand to move to soon,
But others have enriched the world
Or caused the footprints on the moon;
And some impulses, from a heart,
Have sparked impulses on a wire,
And these impulses, sent to you
Have played their role, and lit a fire.
A romance sparked with impulses,
A friendship spun in cyberlands;
Now time has woven us together
In a tapestry that God had planned.
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Light red ink- in the 3rd from last stanza the second to should be too.
This really is a beautiful piece of work. Poetry isn't always my favorite but your piece really touched me. Nicely done!