The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/09
Oh, very good! I haven't read anything like this at all in this week's topic. Those last three stanzas really stand out--excellent!
01/16/09
Bold writing! Good for you.
This is excellent! And so thought provoking!Very well done!
01/18/09
Hold fast - there is yet a TRUE church that is not always found in the institutionalized one. Keep looking. Thanks for sharing your heart.
01/19/09
This is absolutely great! God bless you for sharing. I hope I can get there some day! Verna
Very thought provoking poetry. I pray that is not how all American churches are viewed . . .
It's really sad that so many churches throughout the world, are empty because somewhere along the line people have lost their first love.
Well done.
Norms
Very good...I think this is a universal problem not unique to the USA in any means...thanks for sharing your heart.
01/21/09
I really like how this is in three sections with similarities and differences between the three groups. And this is so good, "And strained each gnat from all they ate, -- But ate a camel in their blindness"
Sorry to say so much of this is true, and you've said it brilliantly.
Excellent comparison--excellent poem.
01/22/09
Oh, excellent. The imagery is top rate, as is the message. Wonderfully done.