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Topic: GOING HOME (from vacation) (09/03/15)
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TITLE: The Metamorphosis | Previous Challenge Entry
By Amy Gaudette
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There are moments in our lives that seemed so destined by God, that even the hardest of hearts are impacted, and the deafest of ears are opened. That was the case with me.
It all happened in a split second on our vacation trip home. I had cut short the time we had at my parents due to a call from work to come back and 'save the day.' Of course, I had to go. A lot of money was at stake and my boss needed me, what could I say?
As we said quick goodbyes, Annie, my seven-year-old sat in the back seat holding a jar with a cocoon in it, given to her by her grandmother. She was crying, not understanding at all why we had to leave.
Peter, my nine-year-old wouldn't talk to me, and the face of my husband, Dave, said loud and clear how he felt.
I turned the radio on, looking for something to change the atmosphere of the car. As the music played I heard Annie call out between sniffles.
“Mommy, can you put some Jesus music on?” she asked. I felt Dave looking at me.
“Not now, honey, it's packed away,” I hoped I wasn't opening a can of worms. Dave and the kids had been attending a local church for the past year, and there was way too much talk about religion. It was fine for them, but I didn't need it.
Annie started crying again.
Suddenly, a flash of lightening filled the car, and a torrential downpour ensued. Thunder seemed to make a physical presence it was so loud.
Dave turned the radio off.
“Let's pull over at the next rest stop.” His voice carried a note of anxiety.
“I want the radio on, Dave. I can get a forecast that way,” I spoke irritatedly and turned the radio back on.
Annie started crying harder. The storm intensified.
“Annie, honey, it's O.K. Jesus is with us, even in the storm,” Dave spoke to reassure her.
“Meghan, please pull over. Let's wait this storm out,” Dave asked again.
I answered impatiently. “As soon as. . .”
I never finished my sentence. A bolt of lightening struck almost on top of us, and I jerked the wheel of the car. It took us over the middle line, into oncoming traffic. The sound of smashing metal, of windows shattering, and your children screaming is something I would not wish on anybody.
A minute later I lay face down in mud. Except for passing cars, it was silent, and the silence was chilling. I couldn't even call out to my family. I'd never felt so helpless in all my life. I've heard of people saying 'my life passed before my eyes', but unless you experience something like this, it means nothing. The terror of not being able to get to my kids, not knowing if Dave was dead or alive, was indescribable.
Suddenly, I felt a warm hand on my shoulder.
“Dave?” I quickly asked.
But no one was there. The clouds began to part and the rain stopped. I could see rays of the setting sun banishing the darkness, and literally enveloping us, like we were being held in the hands of God himself.
Then I saw something else, something I will never forget as long as I live. The most beautiful butterfly I have ever seen. That had to be Annie's butterfly, wings outstretched, it landed right before my eyes. Inches away from my face, it rose up again and landed on my shoulder, right where I felt someone touch me. To say I cried was an understatement. I bawled like a baby. God was here with us, just like Dave had said. He was here through the storm.
In that second, I knew we would be O.K., and I was being given a second chance.
Paramedics were at the scene, and we were all taken to the nearest hospital. My kids and Dave were released the next day, and I went home a week later. My hip never completely mended, and I walk with a limp to this day. It was a small price to pay for chance to start over, and start with Jesus.
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“Mommy, can you put on the Jesus music?” I hear Annie hollering from the next room.
“You bet sweetie. That's my favorite.”
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I also liked how you tied in the daughters cocoon to mom's epiphany.
Well done!