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I really enjoyed this story with its humorous slant. Eloise reminded me of the character in “Steel Magnolias” played by Shirley MacLaine. The only “red ink” here that I see is a few missing commas, pesky but necessary, as in one sentence it would help insure that a pink-bunny slipper not be named for a policeman. ;-)
07/29/11
Hehehe I know someone like this.... She owns a farm that backs up to our property, and since it's unincorporated, she has been known to try to shoot things. Or at least have her son shoot things for her. :)
07/30/11
A good humorous story - I thought everything would turn out ok! Enjoyable!
07/30/11
Very enjoyable read with fun dialogue and strong characters.
Great characterization here, and a fun plot to follow!