The Official Writing Challenge
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Fun, fun! And well done.
11/12/10
Very interesting story, and I can identify with the computer frustration. Well written
This is a cute story. I really felt drawn into it and delighted in the characters. I did notice your email address changed from bahoo to baboo but I had to smile because I've done similar things. This was a charming romance. Nicely done.
Sweet! Great story.
11/18/10
Old dogs, new skills, new tricks.
I loved the way this flowed, right to the rug-puller of its ending.
Congratulations for placing 10th in level 3!