The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Interesting turnaround for Ted. I liked the names you gave your characters. This was creative with the mobbing reporters and getting out of town. I would've liked to know if Ted ever did believe.
02/15/08
The first part of this is incredibly powerful and the descriptions vivid and memorable. I was so engaged.

It may just be me, but the second part seemed to "fizzle" a bit. It wasn't as intense as the first. Still good, but it didn't grab me.

Your title is perfect - love how it fits BOTH stories. Keep writing!
05/07/08
There was so much tension in the first part of the story that I wanted to find out why she was in prison. Also true that God uses prison to get people's attention and draw them to Christ. (I love the Gospel of John too!)