The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/06
What a touching tribute and dedication to one of God's children, who walked the walk and talked the talk. You have painted a delightful picture of what a real Christian should be...and I fall far short. Thanks for reminding me. Great Write and Terrific Read.
07/29/06
It appears from your conclusion that you are writing this letter to Judy, and yet it isn't until the end that you speak to her in the second person. I think changing "Judy" to "you" would make this a more powerful piece. But in an case, it is very good.
Beautiful memorial for a special friend! Your story held my attention througout.