The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your opening and knew exactly what you were saying. You did a nice job of transitioning to the Bible story. This is a nice devotion and has a good message.
05/28/15
Well done. I enjoyed your approach to the topic and your writing style. Thanks for sharing.
05/29/15
Good introduction to the Bible lesson. Trust is the key to any relationship.