The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
This was so entertaining!Cute title too!
02/08/06
I'm dying to know if the coffee worked or not! Very good piece. A couple of minor things like "citrus". And I loved the line: "…my mother called them “character lines”. Hmph. I must be a real character, I speculated as I looked closer at the tiny nearly-invisible lines." I got lots of those.

02/09/06
Very funny!
Very cute story! Is it true? The only thing I wondered about was "Kicken Cures." Was it supposed to be kitchen? Or are my eyes tired:( By the way, I LOVE Lucy, so any type of Lucy antics are a favorite with me. Thanks for sharing your story Coffee Head!
02/12/06
Aside from a couple of words misspelled, (or perhaps pesky and kitchen were not the intended words)...I loved the piece! Very entertaining and you're right! Very "Lucy-ish!" Kudos!