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12/05/13
Prolific entry with powerful messages throughout the entire piece. Truths, and affirmations of past, current and times to come. Excellent writing, excellent message. I especially thought this line fabulous:
It goes more like this; "you may do your own thing if it matches my own thing."

Great job! Thank you.

God bless~
I really enjoyed this. I thought you made some great points. We have gone overboard with political correctness. People need to look at the intention behind the word. If the intention is hateful even a simple word could turn into a swear word. I like your point about identification too. You did a nice job of touching on the topic in a fresh and interesting way.
12/09/13
Thank you for your interesting commentary and journalistic approach. One sentence said: "the problem is that we do like to be told what to do." - you probably meant "the problem is that we don't like to be told what to do." Oh those sneaky typo's.
Keep writing!
12/11/13
Very well written and I agree with you. It's not the words, it's the intent.
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