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This is quite clever. I think you did a nice job of tackling the topic and delivering an important message. The only red ink I have is to make sure you include the translation of the Bible you quote. Overall you did a good job on this fresh piece.
04/29/13
Very nicely done! Great message and creative construction. Thanks for sharing.
04/30/13
Very clever and an interesting take on the topic.
This clicked with me! Wonderful throughout . . .
Praise YHWH!
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