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I'll go ahead and say it "Saved by the bell" (or the buzz). Never mess with God's timing or a woman's intuition. Nice story.
Loved this very much. Saved by the buzz of texting and God's leading. A very enjoyable read. I love reading each entry in my group. I learn so much. Thank you for sharing.
You certainly painted Roger as a self-satisfied pain in the neck. Nicely told.
Good flow and easy to read. I liked the voices of your characters and I liked the ending. Nice work.
I'm glad Sally got that text from Frandma just in time. Charming story.
Great stuff!! Well rounded antagonist. Encouraging for we grandmothers too.