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TITLE: Bui Doi Child | Previous Challenge Entry
By Coleene VanTilburg
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
I am lust.
I am born.
I am disposable.
I am street child.
I am Hanoi.
I am American soldier.
I am Vietnam woman.
I am hungry.
I am orphan.
I am Amerasian.
I am bui doi, dust child.
I am bruised.
I am dirty.
I am shoeless.
I am motherless.
I am numb.
I am voiceless.
I am Tran.
I am dejected.
I am dust.
I find scraps to eat.
I find shelter.
I find work.
I find others.
I find opportunity.
I have picture.
I have face.
I have "auntie."
I have job.
I am given papers.
I am given identity.
I am given shoes.
I am given purpose.
I am given over.
I am a pawn.
I am used.
I am a commodity.
I am three gold bars.
I am purchased.
I am discarded.
I am rejected.
I am half-blood.
I am lost.
I am embarrassment.
I am reminder.
I am now immigrant.
I am now in United States.
I am now helped.
I am now older.
I am now free.
I am now surviving.
I have found home.
I have found sponsor.
I have found school.
I have found a voice.
I have found comfort.
I have found safety.
But I am still lost.
But I am still nobody.
But I am still unloved.
But I am still Tran.
But I am still dust.
I learn.
I grow.
I question.
I answer.
I search.
I see.
I want.
I reach out.
I listen.
I feel something.
I feel everything.
I feel hope.
I feel encouraged.
I feel stronger.
I feel love.
Who is this God?
What is this love?
Where do I find it?
Why does He love me?
When can I know?
How does it work?
Yes, He died
So I can live?
I am His child?
I am adopted?
I will have a true identity.
I will have hope.
I will have a future.
I will have a country.
I will have fellowship.
I will have community.
I will have Truth.
I will have brothers.
I will have sisters.
I will believe.
I am no longer dust child.
I am no longer fatherless
I am Child of war.
I am Christ's child.
I am Citizen of Heaven.
I am Worthy.
I am Grace.
I am Tran.
I am Saved.
Ephesians 2:19 So then you are no longer strangers and aliens, but you are fellow citizens with the Saints, and are of God's household.
Many children conceived and born of Vietnam mothers and American soldiers were outcasts. Later they were used as pawns to facilitate a family escaping the Communist regime and immigrating to the U.S., since they were recognized by the embassy as having American features. “Temporarily adopted”, and once arriving into the U.S; they were once again shunned and discarded within their community.
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it's sad. may God help them know they are loved. That in his eyes, they are not outcast.
By the way, don't forget to read some of the other stories in Intermediates and leave feedback. Let's all help one another
Excellent job; well done.
Well done.
I like this one a lot; I like the flow of it, and the way you built it using short phrases to build images.
Keep up the good work!
Blessings,
Ben