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Topic: Love (04/27/06)
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TITLE: Back Together | Previous Challenge Entry
By Becky Depp
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As Matthew waited he bowed his head and prayed: Lord, please let this go well. Let her love me...
When Matthew opened his eyes he saw a Woman standing in front of him. "Matthew?" she asked… "Yes?" he answered. "I'm Andrea…I'm your mom." She said back to him.
Both Andrea and Matthew were excited to be reunited. Andrea gave birth to Matthew when she was 17 years old and gave him up for adoption.
Their conversation seemed to go by slow but yet Matthew was surprised it was over already. As Andrea stood to leave she said "I love you Matthew, I always have." Matthew smiled and said "I love you too—Mom." Matthew watched his mom walk out of the Café and he whispered under his breath "Thank you God."
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Story continued from "Inner Strength" challenge.
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I would've liked to have seen a longer piece. Maybe some more dialogue, intermixed with descriptions of the characters, setting, etc.
But, still a good job. I liked it
Also, you mentioned his name a lot. That's not really necessary with only two characters. But, great for the topic of love and like the first comment said, I like how your title misleads a bit. Good job!