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10/08/15
A very nice re-telling of this story. I love the way you made these characters come alive
10/08/15
Very well written. It was nice to imagine what it might have been like back then for Paul and the early Christians. You did a great job of making the story real for us today.

All the best. :)
10/09/15
WOnderful work!

God bless~
10/11/15
The opening pulled me into the story. This was an excellent retelling of the story of Paul and Phone. Descriptions of the atmosphere were spot on.
A well written behind the scenes event concerning Bible history.

Even though I did not know where it would lead, it was interesting.

The end explained it all.
10/15/15
You pulled me in & teased me all the way through the story. You had my full attention through the entire story. I enjoyed it very much.
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