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10/08/15
Yummy. You have me craving some lemonade. But more importantly, you remind us how important the Holy Spirit is to our lives. Thank you.

All the best. :)
I enjoyed your entry and especially the way you placed a thirst in the reader to get more of the Holy Spirit. The Holy Spirit is often portrayed to play a "behind the scene" role and yet so vital to everything. The comparisons you made were "exciting and refreshing".

Keep writing!
10/09/15
Beautiful approach and perfect analogy as the segue into a very important part of our daily lives.

God bless~
10/11/15
Thank you for reminding us that the Holy Spiritgives us a zest in our lives that cannot be quenched.
Your thoughts seemed to jump around a little before they settled down.

One thing you said was very true. The Holy Spirit is free. He is free gift that is given to each believer when he/she is baptized for the forgiveness of their sin. Acts 2:38

He is to live within us and guide us.
02/05/16
Lemonade is a great refresher, but the Holy Spirit is even a greater refresher. Lemonade provides a temporary fix, but the Holy Spirit fixes you permanently...Love it!!!

Thank you!