The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/15
This is a good reminder that everyone's part is important in the Body of Christ. I like the way you brought it back to the story of the Widow's Mite.
10/08/15
I like what you wrote. Some very good advice, and a push for the reader to contemplate their relationship with God and what He might want them to do.

Critique: There are a few sentences you might want to shorten and change some of the wording.

All the best. :)
10/09/15
Loved this!
God bless~
10/09/15
This was a reminder that every member is important in the church God has a special purpose for each one of us.
Anything we don't do for Jesus, we do for our self.

Fewer words, hit harder.