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11/07/13
A moving and powerful entry that held my attention while providing an inspirational message.

Beautifully said and done.
Thank you for sharing.


God bless~
Yes, good thought, nicely written.

When we ask for things that we know God wants done, we know he will answer.

God is good at answering prayers that bring him the glory he deserves.

Again, well written and from the heart.
This is a great example of an ideal devotion. I like how you started with a real life experience that most people can relate to.

There are some spots where you are missing a comma that a good proofreader would catch.

The one thing that would make this even better would be a prayer at the end. Not everyone knows how to pray and including a prayer in the devotion would show that it's like talking to a good friend. Your Scripture was a great match to back up your message. Nicely done.
11/14/13
Victoria,Congratulations!

God bless~