The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/13
Simply beautiful in its content and delivery...the message and meaning.

Nicely done.

God bless~
Very good thoughts of encouragement.

God loved us first so that we would love him.

He tests us when he says, "If you love me, keep my commandments".

To prove God's love, he gave us Jesus. To prove our love, we keep his commandments.

God is worth writing about. Keep writing.
This is a sweet devotion. I especially liked the tender exchange between mother and daughter. I'd love to know how Mom answered her. I don't know that you needed the last bit. Your meaning was quite clear. Many think they have to use the topic words to be on topic, but some of the best stories that nailed the topic never used the topic words. You did a wonderful job of covering the topic in a clear fresh way. Keep writing!
11/10/13
Inspiring devotional. Such a awesome reminder of God's unfailing love.
11/14/13
Congratulations!

God bless~