The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/13
I like your idea of repeating gossip. I really enjoyed the berry comparison. You fully explained each step of that simile, and it is an enjoyable comparison.

If you consider revising this, think about expanding on the type of writing you have with the berry comparison. It gives the reader's mind something specific to see, smell, and even taste. Thanks for sharing.
02/02/13
Great job with this piece...Well written and well done. God bless~
I really like this devotion. You doing nice job of starting off with something we can all relate to.

I'm not sure if you needed that ending about the blueberries as it seemed a bit disjointed from the other part of the article.

I think you did a wonderful job of waiting on to hack. Your scripture choices are a perfect fit for your message. Overall, this was a delight to read and it also made me stop and think about my intentions when praying for others.
02/10/13
This is a crucial topic. So many lives have been ripped apart by gossip, and so have ministries. Thanks for the message.