The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely message. I always enjoy devotions that start out with a true-life story. You did a great job of transitioning into the Bible from your story.

You do have quite a few errors like writing you instead of your. When someone different speaks, you should start a new paragraph and double spacing between them will give the reader that white space that makes it easier to read. A good proofreader can help you catch these or if you wait a day or two, then read your story aloud, you may pick up on some of the typos.

I could feel the pain of the MC. Adults often seem to forget what it was like to be a kid. Your testimony teaches not only to be patient and loving parents but to shout Thank you to Christ who is so patient with our many flaws.
Great job with this authentic story that holds significance and brings forward an important and crucial message to all who read it.

Nicely done. Thank you.
God bless~