The Official Writing Challenge
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well that was a very interesting twist! Great story...moved along nicely, kept my attention, and again, the twist at the end was quite provocative
Oh, my, yes, very nicely done! Loved the whole concept!
04/22/11
very clever. it is like the secret millionaire. very well written
04/23/11
I liked this! Good story and great surprise at the end.
04/24/11
Awesome! Great story!
This story, so well told, brings to mind so many Biblical truths: Give and it shall be given to you in return. The widow's mite. The talents given to the three servants of the master. The principle of stewardship over what has been given to us. Nicely done and such a good message.
04/27/11
Very enjoyable read. Great story and lesson.
Oh, my. Beginner? I don’t think so. This was very well written; you had me all the way. Your MC was interesting and unexpected. I thought that maybe you were overdoing his prayers, but not at all. Good foreshadowing in the first paragraph and a great ending. Well done!
04/27/11
I sense a winner here...or did I already say that? :)
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level one!
This left tears in my eyes I loved your characters and the ending was grand.
04/30/11
well done... you got a well deserved 7th place