The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
I loved your story, it brought back memories of finding out about my 5 babies. Thank you sharing the excitment and warmth a new life brings.
02/17/11
Nicely told. Thank you for sharing.
02/18/11
So beautiful, I got goosebumps at the end.
I loved the 'blue berry, grape' description. Such an encouraging story.
02/19/11
great story and a good use of the weeks theme. fearfully and wonderful made indeed. The title is a little misleading in that you describe the news rather than "the arrival" although I can see why you have used it as you start with the "expected date" of arrival.
small pint it is vey well told
02/21/11
Great flow and great take on the topic. I was a little confused in the beginning but it became clear pretty quickly. Good job!
02/22/11
Life is such a precious gift. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story.
Congratulations for placing 15th in level one.