The Official Writing Challenge
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What a lovely poem. It told such a sweet story.
08/06/10
What a scary event for both mother and son! You have pointed out how important the sense of smell is in our lives.

Well written and a nice smooth read. I really like this poem. Blessings. :)
Congratulations for placing in the top 8 of your level.
08/16/10
I can feel (smell) the fear in this story. Great job. Congrats on placement.