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By veronica cressey
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He now has a partner who is profoundly deaf, which led Dianne to enroll in a class for to learn sign language.
I have not met the deaf person yet.
However,I know that the deaf person, Ross, has a problem with his neighbours. Why? Because when he plays music, he has the volume turned up so loud, that he can actually FEEL the vibration through the floor of his house. Same when he drives. The music is THROBBING in his car.
Which led him to create a dance class for deaf people, hard of hearing.
This class has become an enormous success.In fact, Ross was on TV last year, here in Australia, when a certain telephone company sponsored his dance class!Ross was born deaf in one ear only.
An accident took his hearing completely.
I can only feel compassion for Ross, who can never hear the sound of a child's laughter, music from my favourite singer, Stevie Wonder,profanities from an angry person and so the list goes on.
Hearing is one of the senses we are born with, one of God's gifts.Imagine waking up one morning and the sound of silence is deafening! Imagine not being able to HEAR a joke!Imagine how desperately you want to learn to play a musical instrument, but you can't hear the piano keys, or the strum of a guitar!
Let us give gratitude for all of our senses.
Never mock the afflicted is a sentence by which I live and love.
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Praying for these young gentlemen to now be filled with the saving grace of repentance to follow Jesus and His ways. As for never being able to hear profanities of an angry person...glad they won't :)
I do think you have the ability to write. I am a beginner myself. I willingly accept criticism. I find it hard to critique as I am an encourager.
Just one thing put a space between paragraphs will help the reader to read with more flow.
This could be only my opinion. Maybe a more experienced writer could help out here.
Great keep writing.