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09/13/07
I love the parallel you made--it was very applicable and one that everyone can relate to. Good job!
09/14/07
Very nice entry. I enjoyed it.
Laury
Nice reminder that even though God's face sometimes seems hidden, like a loving parent, He's still "behind the hands" Good devotional - well written.
09/15/07
Wonderful illustration!
This is a great devotional! I suggest leaving out the sentence: "My Christian walk is not a game, but I do see a parallel in my response to God's blessings."

Go into the parallel rather than introducing the parallel. Otherwise, great, great, great!
10/20/07
Beautiful devotional. I love the tie-in you made with your children, and the delight you feel when God responds to your needs. Good writing!