The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
Josh and Kevin aren't the only ones who wondered what happened to the mysterious young woman they left on Brag Moor! :) I also wonder what was written on the scroll in her hand! Very suspenseful story! It also has a good message of obedience to God even when we don't understand everything that's happening and don't always see the results of our work!
06/02/07
Sounds like the makings of a much longer story--very intriguing.
06/02/07
Very good suspense - I also want to know what happened! Would have liked a bit more dialogue, but that may just be a personal preference. Nice job!
I wanted more. More details about the Bible Code, more about who he was, more about what happend. Very good writing, just not enough! Thanks.
06/04/07
Enjoyed the suspense and the descriptive language. Voice in the breeze, and the figure with hair blowing in the breeze. Great creativity!