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01/22/26
This was such a heart wrenching story but I liked how the writer pointed how God’s mercy no matter what you have done if you ask Jesus’s forgiveness and mercy, and believe than God offers salvation
01/23/26
I was immediately pulled into this story. You made this character's sadness, anger and conflicting feelings related to matters of life, death and justice leap from the page. It sounded like a "true" account of a man living with memory, regret and uncertainty about his salvation. That coupled with the time span, cold-case scenario, etc. made me search the internet a little for the existence of such a cold case! (lol). If it's there, I didn't find it! But I feel that is a mark of good storytelling-to capture the reader and have a scenario ring true. The biggest message that rang true and shined throughout though was about God's infinite grace and mercy extended to all who believe and repent! I loved the ending, as the man "went home with the Lord." There are a few typos within the story, so an extra proof would be good in order to polish! Great story!
A compelling story. Blessings