The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting essay. I'd urge you to work on transitions a bit more. At first you were talking about parenting, but then didn't mention it again. There were places I didn't fully understand what you were saying, but that could just be my foggy brain. I definitely can tell you have a great desire to spread the Word to others. I could see this as an interesting tool to get a small group Bible study talking or it could be used as a sermon. Nice job.