The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful and hard truths. Well written.
03/17/23
You did a lot of research for this.

I found all the references quite distracting from understanding what you were saying. In the past, I've use the footnote method, so have it all at the end of the article. It seems to make for a smoother read.

I like the analogy of clothing of righteousness.