The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/23


Good teaching. Thank you.
I find your thoughts well ordered and as Peter said 'money can't buy the gift of God'.
An insightful commentary.
I speculate as to the judge's interpretation of 'goodbye' being a passable derivation of 'bye'.
I think they will.
You make some good points and this would make an intriguing lecture. You need to work on having smoother transitions. It feels like it jumps around a bit. You did a nice job of writing on topic and bringing up some thought-provoking points.
True gospel message. Thanks for sharing. Blessings