The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/22
This story engaged me from beginning to end. What a wonderful twist on the topic. Excellent piece. I loved it.
Delightful!! Very interesting and captivating!
03/19/22
Just wow!
Very creative. This is going to make me sound ignorant, I know, but I don’t understand why this looks like a poem but reads like any story. Maybe you can enlighten me with a kind personal message. But nice job on an engaging entry.
This is a sweet story. You did a nice job of pulling the characters together. I'm not an expert at free verse poetry by any means but I enjoyed it. Congratulations on ranking 13th overall. Happy Dance!