The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/21
Interesting story, with a powerful close.

Blessings~
This is a great suspense piece. Because of the time jump, it may have been hard for some to folliw, but I enjoyed it from the first conflict to the last. I especially liked the ending. So many are tempted to tie things up in a bow, but I think this ending is brilliant. Congratulations on ranking 16th overall. Happy Dance!