The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is powerful. The descriptions are so vivid. I suppose some might think too vivid, but I'd strongly disagree. It really sets the stage and when my nose twitches from the smells, I know I'm reading a very talented author.
05/06/21
Congratulations on your 5th place finish, Lorie.

Vivid descriptions engaged me in your story!