The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/19
Awww! Loved your play on words at the end. She never did get it, did she! This was very interesting to read. Well done!
This is a sweet story. You have a great conflict to pull me in. Although I believe in angels, the ending of a mysterious stranger is a bit overdone. (I even did it once myself a long time ago.) I do like how she didn't realize he was an angel though, so that adds a nice spin to it. Good job.