The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/17
You did a good job of taking a familiar Bible story and turning it into a contemporary tale. In the back of my mind, I wondered if you were talking about John the Baptist's beheading.
I liked the familiar story from a different point of view. I wondered if there would be a climax involving the two ladies somehow, but I think you captured well the perspective of unimportant people to the actions of their higher ups.