The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/17
Kindness...the characters in your story inspire kindness & thoughtfulness...even if not being shown to you by others. It touched my heart.
01/24/17
This is a great heartwarming story. I like your consistent mix of dialogue and narrative. Well done.
When the root cause of the problem is identified, then solution seems simpler. I thoroughly visualized this story because my daughter was faced with a similar situation. Well done. Keep writing.