The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/16
I thought this was beautiful. By the end I felt like I'd been through a lifetime with this couple.

Well written!
09/08/16
Beautiful, and well-deserving of your EC.
09/20/16
I really 'got it' the second and third read through. It is a stunning and profound piece of poetry. Well done.